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 Pinkamina's Fate:  Lost Epilogue
   A Random Crack Story
   Idea by: Hidden Name
   Written by: Gabriel Martin

    Outside of Ponyville, you seem to zoom in on a graveyard. Inside the Graveyard, you notice an odd headstone. The headstone says "Here lies Pinkamina Diane Pie. Rest in HELL!". you also see a Half-Mecha version of Rainbow Dash, crying in pain and sadness. You also see a flower on Fluttershy's grave. Now I bet you're wondering..."How the fuck did this happen?". Allow me to explain the Story. I named it "Pinkamina's Fate: Lost Epologue". Let's begin with how this all started, shall we?

    It first started out after Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy "died", Pinkie Pie was waiting for her next victim to turn into a cupcake. Little did she know, that her next victim....was gonna be her last one. Pinkie Pie discovers a rather oddly-dressed Colt walking by. The Colt was wearing a Red hat, with an odd badge on the front of it. He was also wearing a Red Vest with a black t-shirt. Even the mane was black, but his eyes were crimson red without a single hint of emotion from them. Pinkie also noticed the red-and-white spheres around his waist, one with a rather spine-chilling aura as it was emenating a shadowly purplish-black glow.

   The odd colt walked to the cupcake bakery. "Ohhh, this one will make an interesting cupcake! Red was always my FAVORITE color.", said Pinkie. What our beloved little Pinkie Pie didn't know, is that this is one pony she should've wished she never met. As Pinkie opened the door for the odd colt, The silent and emotionless colt walked in, only leaving silence in his trail. As Pinkie Pie was getting ready, the odd sphere with the aura that's bone-chilling started leaking some sort of shadowy ectoplasm. Before Pinkie got ready for her new batch of "cupcakes", the shadow took form of a black ghost, with it's glowing white eyes staring straight at her. As she turned around, she rather got startled by the ghostly figure. The odd colt soon stared at her with his cold, red eyes. Finally, the colt spoke with a soft tone.


   The ghostly figure soon turned the inside of the bakery darker than midnight, and an echoing yet distorted scream was heard in the darkness. After the darkness slowly faded away, the little pink-colored pony murderer was no where to be seen....

This is the beginning....of "Pinkamina's Fate: Lost Epologue"

    Pinkamena woke up in a strange small room with a hole in the middle. She screams in the room "Where am I? What did you do?", hoping to find an answer, but no one was there to answer her plea. She soon looks down into the hole. With no other escape by the looks of it, she jumped down into a dark room. There, she found a poor filly, with a flaming mane, on the floor, bleeding to death. She carried the poor young pony, and asked it if there was a way to light the room up. The green-and-tan Filly, with the word "HURRY" etched onto her body, lighted the room up, revealing the blood-washed walls and floor. She was hoping to find an exit to get out of wherever she was, and she also took the filly with her as it was only source of light.

    Pinkamina managed to find a hallway, but it seemed to get darker the farther it goes due to the filly's mane beginning to get dimmer with every passing second. She had no choice or no way to help the filly, so we walked through the hallway. It kept getting darker, and darker, until she can vaguely make out what seems like a dead end with a signpost. The signpost said:


    Pinkamina didn't want to leave, as there was no turning back. She said no, but nothing happened. She yelled no. Nothing happened. She exclaimed no, Still, nothing happened. Only more echoing of her voice. Finally, she screamed one last "NO!". The room turn darkened, and a message has appeared. It said....

    "Hurry has d...."

    Soon, some mystical force was pulling Pinkamina Pie backwards into some sort of opening into a wall, and through a maze of pure darkness. Pinkamina's punishment and remorse...was about to begin.

    Pinkamina reappears in her basement, where she was just finishing off her "cupcakes", but for some reason, she couldn't see anything. She tried feeling around her face, only to realise she had no eyes. She also realized that the mysterious new colt has disappeared as well. Heck, she didn't even have a mane anymore. Somehow, some mystical force was guiding her way out. She left the basement, and entered the main room in the bakery. There was blood stains everywhere, the blood of all the ponies she slained just to make the "special" cupcakes for her unsuspecting customers.

    Pinkamina was getting scared. She was frightened by what she soon realised what she has done. She tried to cry, tears of blood only came out. She left the bakery, using the mystical force to see around her. She's in a part of Ponyville, where she sees a maneless, eyesocket-less pony with a pink tail and has a Butterfly Cutiemark. It turns out that the pony...was Fluttershy. She was sad, but also angry. As Pinkamina tried to talk to her, Fluttershy only responded with "We are even....", then vanished.

    After 'Fluttershy' vanished from existance, Pinkamina was somehow teleported to the entrance to Ponyville, but it was full of Eyesocket-less ponies, and the very town itself lost most of its' wonderful color. Somehow, they still kept their manes. Rarity and the other remaining ponies of the Mane 6, except Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash, who were not there, were standing side-by-side, looking down. Surprisingly, though, Rarity, Applejack, and Twilight still had their eyes, but they lost their color. Letter-shaped creatures seem to float around the ponies. As Pinkamina tried talking to them, they didn't respond, but the creature floating around them started to float around her.

    After 12 tries to talk with the others, including Rarity, Twilight Sparkle, and Applejack, She got teleported to a alternate version of Ponyville, which was wrecked, tattered, and is just colorless to the fullest extent. there was only a straight, clear, pathway that she can only walk through. Finally, the wierd letter-shaped creatures spelt out a message.


    Pinkamina tried to run away, only to be teleported to a path in a lone forest. She soon she's the odd colt stare at her for a moment, then walk off towards the path. The blind Pinkamina followed him, only to be stopped by a tower. She entered into the tower, only by a voice telling her to stop, and dont go any further. She ignored the warning, and fell into the same deep hole that started this all. What will happen to her now?

    Pinkie finds herself in the same room she left off before she took a trip through that 'nightmare'. She was still carrying "HURRY", but she saw what she did through that event, and she decided to take the alternate. With one breath, she said the only other option:


    The room turned dark, and "HURRY" seemed to die again, just like when she denied her fate. But this time, Pinkamina finds herself in a graveyard, surrounded by graves she cant jump through. She also cant feel her front legs. As she looked down, she saw a frighening surprise.

Her front legs were ripped straight off.

    Pinkie starts getting really scared. She was somehow standing normally, however. She tried running around, only to be dragged by skeletal hands to somewhere lower. She then landed into a hallway. As she got up, she looked down to see that her hind legs were gone as well too. Somehow, the wierd creatures surrounding her was keeping her afloat. She continued down the hallway, then she saw something very odd.

    There were multiple clones of her, each with a different emotion, and no color. She tried talking to them, but they didn't respond. As she went farther into the hallway, she soon saw what seems to be a half-mechanized Rainbow Dash, who was really angry. Then, a battle started. She kicked Pinkamina, who was sent flying straight into a wall. "This is all your fault!", yelled Rainbow Dash, "BECAUSE OF YOU, I CAN NEVER BE THE SAME!" She was holding Pinkie's pet alligator by the mouth, and ripped him in a complete half by prying him open from his toothless mouth, right in front of Pinkamina's own eyes.

    Pinkamina was crying from fear, as Rainbow Dash vanished from her sight. Before she completely vanished, her last words were "How does it feel, Pinkie? How does it feel to lose something precious to you?". Then, the wierd creatures sent her back to what seems to look like her Bakery, but it was cold, and empty. She tried to leave, only to phase through the door, and continue through a black void. She soon to see...Herself. The other "Pinkie" turned her head to see Pinkamina. Before the copy slowly vanished from reality, her spoken words were only:

"Party's over, Pinkamina Diane Pie...."

    As we now return to the normal world, she soon find Rarity, Applejack, and Twilight Sparkle entering the bakery, looking for the whereabouts of Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie. To their surprise, they found the most horrifying thing to find in Pinkie's Bakery. The Corpse of a Pink-maned pony with her cutiemark missing, her eyes gone from their sockets, her legs missing, and a frown on her face with blood coming out, while pinned to a wall. The blood on the wall somehow made an arrow, pointing to the basement. Still creeped out, the ponies made their way down, only to see what was left of Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy. They were shocked in fear, seeing what Pinkie was REALLY doing. Applebloom's eyes were covered by Applejack's tail, for she did not want her to see this. As they turn around, they were confronted by the odd colt that started the horror in the first place.

    "The punishment has been made. The lives taken from her shall have their peace knowing that the one who took their life away has finally fallen.", said the colt "However, The rainbow-maned one is still alive. You can still save her if you hurry to her aid." Twilight asked one question, "Who are you?", she asked. The colt looked up with his cold, red eyes, and replied with only one thing, which was his name:

"...Red Trainer..."

    Afterwards, the colt, who was finally known as Red Trainer, vanished out of Twilight's sight, leaving nothing more than silence and death.

*1 month after the horror, leading to present time...*

    Pinkamina's bakery has been closed down since. Ponyville went back to what they were doing. Rainbow Dash was not used to her new body. Everyday, she visited Fluttershy's grave, bringing a flower to her. Rainbow was crying, seeing how she lost a good friend, thanks to that murderous traitor of a friend. Red was still out there somewhere, as Twilight Sparkle and Princess Celestia wanted some answers about Pinkamina and who, or what, IS this "Red Trainer" they met. Rarity and Applejack were still doing their own business, but now they know Pinkie's dark, terrible secret, and the haunting facts of what happened to those who knew her secret while she was alive. Ponyville will not exactly be the same again. Not after what happened, And thus, ending the Story of Pinkamina's Fate: Lost Epilogue....
Hey There, this was made in full version in case you dont want to go through the bloody trouble of having to click each part to read. You're welcome!

So yeah, the complete full version of that one requested story that I regret making now that I re-read this pile of shit, also with fixes compared to the original.

Pinkamena Diane Pie/MLP:FiM (c) Hasbro (Dont sue me plz)
Lost Silver/Cursed Black (c) Who the crap knows
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Submitted on
November 6, 2015
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